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2014.07.02 01:34 Thedarkfly Wankil

Subreddit de Wankil Studio ! soyez drôles par pitié (et en rapport avec wankil svp mais vous êtes pas des abrutis pas vrai)
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2014.05.20 09:46 RaccoonyDave Lancées d'écriture

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2009.08.25 17:43 FanFiction FanFiction: Where Magical Ponies battle Imperial Titans

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2023.06.05 14:37 MundaneFoot7260 Looking for fanfics where the side characters get to shine!

Basically what it says on the tin: I love fanfics where random side characters get full development, like when that random shopkeeper from episode 2, season 3 of a show gets a gigantic, multi chapter odyssey all over the world.
I’ll recommend some of my own, for anyone who wants to try out this style of fanfic:
Event Horizon (RWBY fic, timeloop, stars Ciel Soleil)
Redemption (RWBY fic, goes DEEP into the characters of team CRDL)
Infighting, Insanity, and Social Ineptitude(another RWBY fic, im sorry, but it’s SO GOOD, complete teamswap)
Dreaming of Sunshine(Naruto SI fic, but it’s absolutely the best SI I’ve EVER read. The mc isn’t overpowered, and we get a beautiful look into the lives of her family and those around her, the people who aren’t part of the main team.)
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2023.06.04 17:05 Dreamer469 Regarding Self Insert OCs Keeping Secrets in Fanfiction

I'm currently working on a SI/OC fanfic where the OC changes things without being discovered, and I'm wondering how to properly justify the fact that he isn't just directly telling people the future.
Logically speaking, even if he doesn't reveal that he himself knows the future, wouldn't it be too easy to just randomly slip in an anonymous tip full of important information or something? I don't want that though since it wouldn't make for a good story- or one I want anyways. It's just nagging me a bit since I'm not sure why any SI OC wouldn't just do that.
Thoughts?
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2023.06.02 19:59 Big_Grade382 Searching for Stargate SG-1 fanfiction

So recently I asked chatGPT to recommend some Stargate fanfiction with a tech genius SI. When I tried to search for those stories I didn't find any. Can you please help me find them or recommend fanfiction of same genre.
Here is the search result from chatGPT
Title: "Out of the Blue" Author: PlutoniumNYC Description: In this story, a brilliant computer programmer is transported to the Stargate universe and becomes involved with the SG-1 team. Armed with advanced knowledge and skills, the SI character uses their technical expertise to help the team on their missions. Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13322286/1/Out-of-the-Blue
Title: "Coding in the Gate" Author: Cyberblade Description: This fanfic follows a tech-savvy individual who gets sucked into the Stargate program. As the new member of SG-1, the SI character uses their programming and hacking skills to navigate the complex world of alien technology and help the team overcome various challenges. Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8618503/1/Coding-in-the-Gate
Title: "The Genius in the Gate" Author: Dracis Nightshade Description: A talented hacker and genius programmer finds themselves in the Stargate universe, joining the SG-1 team. The SI character's extensive knowledge of technology proves invaluable as they assist in decrypting alien codes, developing new devices, and outwitting adversaries. Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6073881/1/The-Genius-in-the-Gate
Title: "Silicon Sorcery" Author: Dsbluedragon Description: This fanfic features a Silicon Valley tech guru who gets transported to the Stargate universe and joins the SG-1 team. With their expertise in advanced computing and hacking, the SI character uses their skills to unravel ancient secrets, modify alien technology, and help save the day. Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12254225/1/Silicon-Sorcery
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2023.05.31 05:32 Bat4tenhacoolkie Sou babaca por falar a real e expor conselhos ao meu melhor amigo?

Meu amigo é um pouco inseguro e com problemas psicológicos. Já disse a ele para procurar psicólogos e até mesmo na escola não adiantou, por causa da família e pq ele acha que psicólogos não ajudam tanto.
Vou ser rápido. Nesse exato momento ele está passando por problemas financeiros e entrou em uma grande enrascada. Ele trabalha com comissão mas não vai conseguir lidar com o preço que recebeu pelo trabalho, sendo menor de idade (ele vai fazer vários desenhos). Não tinha um prazo definido em si, então recomendei que ele falasse um prazo médio pra tudo com o cliente e esclarecesse sobre a ocasião. Falei que ele não tinha a obrigação de ajudar os pais, mas ele me contou que iria passar fome se não ajudasse.
O que acontece é que ele está passando por outros problemas por medo das pessoas nas redes sociais em que ele trabalha (uma perseguição, uma paranóia de cancelamento ou quebrarem mais a sua mente), e pedi que relaxasse e não ficasse preso aquilo, dando um tempo ao Instagram e outros perfis. O que acontece é que ele surtou nessa treta toda enquanto eu falava e agr estou um pouco preocupado de não ter sido tão compreensivo, pq eu realmente não conheço sua realidade, mas tentei ajudá-lo. Sei que talvez possa sim parecer fanfic ou que nós estejamos errados, mas eu me considero sim um total imbecil que só queria ajudar, mas eu realmente não mentiria em uma circunstância que meu amigo está sofrendo, e com razão, já que não há tantas alternativas. Espero que ele esteja conversando com seus pais sobre pois eu irei ficar desesperado se rolar algo de ruim com ele.
Me sinto muito imbecil por quem sabe ter ferido algum sentimento dele, e como ele me considera seu melhor amigo, eu pensei sim em ser um pouco mais duro e aconselhador pra ele não ficar maluco e ver uma alternativa, porém se eu apoiasse ele demais talvez ele reclamasse que não estaria fornecendo alguma ideia sobre o seu problema, então fiquei em um problema entre aconselhar demais e apoiar demais e não sabia como equilibrar. Eu fui babaca?
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2023.05.30 01:36 lj0zh123 Are there any other tags for "Voice inside your head" tropes for fanfics?

I'll like to find fanfics where instead of an SI, there is a voice inside a character's head and such, I was wondering if there's a more popular tag or term used for this trope?
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2023.05.29 16:49 Jayjay_09 Actual Good & Long Cartoon OC/SI Male Fanfics

I'm itching for some actual good cartoon OC/SI fanfics that are long read so I can read it for weeks, Any Recommendations?
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2023.05.29 15:43 Kingofireland777 Come join our ASOIAF role play discord server!

We have a role play server run by some of the discord mods that I would like to advertise!
We are planning on doing a run in the Robert's Rebellion era, starting from when Rickard and Brandon die via Aerys shenanigans. The twist is that every character you play as is an SI! how would you survive in the world of Westeros without knowing that other SIs are here as well?
We are going to have a stat system as well as a character selection system where you get to order your choices on who you would like to be. So come along and change the depressing outcomes of some of the most interesting characters in this world.
The link is [here](https://discord.gg/9myFMqQFsZ)
if you are interested in becoming a bigger part of the asoiaf fanfic community, you are welcome to join TheCitadel's discord as well, link is here-https://discord.gg/asoiaffanficcommunity and as always is on the menu.

The deadline for the character selection is June the 3rd
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2023.05.28 13:09 MoleOfWar LF specific Percy Jackson SI or gamer fic

So I read this fanfic some years ago and I can't find it back What I remember is that it was a Percy MC with some kind of gamer system (maybe not a complete one). I'm not sure but it maybe was a SI.
At some point he frees Aphrodite from a bond with another god? And there is a moment where he stays in the ocean with Poseidon and meets his wife and half brother. The wife doesn't seem to like the half brother for some reason (who plays music and fakes being useless). There is a plot of treason that he must investigate while going to a party and ends up fighting some monster (maybe a giant crab) and the party holder. He unlocks new skills at the end (that he must choose) and there is one which gives him some eye power. The plot was that a titan wanted to take back the rule over the oceans if I'm not mistaken and at some times Percy fights alongside his half brother?
Anyway that's all I can remember. Anyone knows this fic and where to find it?
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2023.05.28 03:06 WitnessLow4178 Recordatorio de que si lorgar hubiera permanecido leal seguramente seria el primarca favorito del imperio especialmente las hermanas de batalla, que seguramente escribirían un montón de fanfics de lorgar x celestine adorando a monarchia mas que cualquier sitio.

Recordatorio de que si lorgar hubiera permanecido leal seguramente seria el primarca favorito del imperio especialmente las hermanas de batalla, que seguramente escribirían un montón de fanfics de lorgar x celestine adorando a monarchia mas que cualquier sitio. submitted by WitnessLow4178 to Warhammer40kEsp [link] [comments]


2023.05.28 02:23 Agile-Musician-9534 Best fanfic, Self insert (Si) or reincarnation, male insert into a female.

Hi! Can you recommend long fanfics about si or the reincarnation of a man into a girl. Possible yuri. Cheers!
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2023.05.28 00:46 Renant1924 Mí primer FanFic

Mí primer FanFic
Desde que comenté que quería hacer un FanFic de Warhammer 40K y Monster High me han pasado muchas cosas, para resumir, estoy compartiendo esto desde el hospital, estoy bien, pero finalmente mientras estoy aquí muerto de aburrimiento, me puse ha escribir un primer capítulo, súper cortito y nada impresionante (soy malísimo para contar los inicios de cualquier cosa) así que mañana lo publicaré y lo pasaré por aquí, por si alguien quiere leerlo y decirme que soy más feo que un Tiranido y tonto como Lorgar xD
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2023.05.27 21:31 GHR501 SI FanFic

Does anyone here have read a SI where one brave Imperial of this world ends up in the Star Wars Galaxy and serving our beloved Emperor I tried asking in SwFanic but to no avail.
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2023.05.27 04:12 TiredMistake FanFic Recs plz! Human to Non-human, physically along with mindset, Prefer Oc/Si

I want to read something where a human mc is transformed into something other than human and gains new instincts and therefore an altered mindset, and that they are aware of it having changed and what changed. It can be reincarnation, isekai, or an in-world transformation as long as it's permanent.
-Bonus Points if the form they are in is considered a child/young for their species and gains found-family fluff.
-No harems
-No gratuitous smut
-No Non-con
-No Underage
-Morally-Grey is fine but no super evil
-Prefer to be able to read Fandom blind
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2023.05.27 02:26 sgtmiller1233 The Nature of Reclaimers (4) - AU Halo/NoP Fanfic

Hello everyone, Secondary Writer here, Its been a minute since we last posted. I wanna take a second to thank everyone that has shown interest in the story, we have been having a blast writeing it so far. This chapter is a bit special. We both worked on this together, writing and adding to it in real time. Critisism welcome! Hope you guys enjoy the read!
P.S. u/DoctorDildardo Will be releasing the next chapter, Stay tuned!
Credit to u/SpacePaladin15 for the amazing universe continued story. Also to NatureofPredators for all of the amazing fanfiction we have been reading. Thanks u/DoctorDildardo for including me in your project and help with the editing! Also, Thanks to Bungie and 343 for Halo 8D.
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Memory Transcription Subject: GySGT. John Macintyre, Orbital Drop Shock Trooper, 15th Battalion, 95th Company.
Date (Standardized Human Time): April 21, 2194
I was already storming down the hallway, halfway there. My combat knife was removed from its sheath. The two agents looked at me in a shocked panic and drew their sidearms, screaming at me to stand down. I can't just stand down, not when these freaks are torturing a venlil. God only knows what they could be doing to it. Vall was trying her best to calm me down, yelling after me “Mac, it isn't worth it!”
All I could see was red, her words didn't even register in my mind until later. Closer and closer I got, both agents had racked their weapons and were now pointing them at me. Not much further now. Suddenly my left leg felt heavy, it was hard to move. Son of a bitch! I stumbled in place for a moment, my anger not allowing me to understand what was happening. I chanced a glance down at my now overweight limb, it was Kevri. He was wrapped around my leg in a desperate attempt to stop my rage fueled march.
“Gunnery Sergeant, Stand down and return to your duties immediately or be treated as a threat and met with lethal force!” One of the agents says as he takes aim with his pistol.
I stood there a moment, looking to the two agents and then back to Kevri who was still wrapped around my leg. Poor guy was shaking, probably scared out of his mind. My anger started to dissipate at the sight of this. It was one thing to get myself killed, I didn’t want Kevri to get hurt because of me. If those agents open fire it would hit me and Kevri. I took a few deep breaths and re-sheathed my knife, still staring down the two agents.Fuck you, you goddamn spooks. I heard a small sigh of relief come from my leg, Kevri must have seen me standing down. I'm glad he’s at least calming down.
The distinct sound of claws on metal grating rapidly gets closer, Vall’s voice getting louder as she comes up behind me. “Mac! Come on, don’t do this again!” I shuffle to turn towards Vall, Kevri’s weight still preventing easy movement.
“Vall, I can't just let them do what they are doing!”
“We don't even know what it is they are doing!” she says as he grabs my hand.
“It doesn't matter! It's ONI,whatever it is can't be good. You dont know them like I do!”
“It matters when it is going to cost you your LIFE Mac! Is that how you wanna go out? Shot in your own damn ship because you couldn’t keep your head on straight?!”
I scowled and stood in silence at what she said, she was right, this isn't the way I wanted to go out. She was always right…always fucking right…
“All of you need to return to your duties immediately , Vacate the Area!” the other agent chimes in. Both of their pistols were slightly lowered, seeing the situation was being defused.
I said nothing, just started shuffling my way back to the supply bay. Kevri was still glued to my leg, I thought he might actually be stuck there. I might need a crowbar.
Is-is he done?” Kevri’s voice sounds off from my thigh.
I sighed “Yeah, I'm done kid. You can let go now.”
He isn't letting go…fuck.
I grabbed Kevri by his scruff and pulled him off me, being as gentle as possible. Once removed I put him down on the floor and patted his head lightly. I already scared the shit out of the poor kid, the last thing I needed was him to be afraid of me. I could even see the tears forming in his eyes. He’s so easily frightened, I don't know how the hell I'm gonna’ get him trained up…let alone get him into a pod for drop training. My thoughts were then interrupted by Vall.
“Ahem.” She said in a fake cough.
I turned my head to her quizzically “Yes, Sergeant?”
“Oh, we’re being formal now are we?” She said in a playful tone
“Well no, I ju-”
She interrupts me, snapping her paw to her head in a salute “Sir, I need your signature for this equipment sir!”
“Jesus fuckin’ christ Vall, cut it with that shit.”
“Hey, you’re the one that started it.”
“Just, put your Goddamn hand down. I still work for a living.”
“Whatever you say ‘gunny’.” Vall sasses at me as she places her paw back at her side.
I can't help but roll my eyes at her. Smart ass.
“H-h…What just happened?! You went from going on a murderous rampage to joking with the universe's most unshakable venlil!” Kevri finally speaks as it appears his brain caught up to the situation.
“Ah well uh-you see…” I tense up, trying to explain the sudden mood change
Vall came around and placed her tail on Kevri’s back, taking charge of the conversation Oh thank god!
“Mac and I go waaaay back, I know how to calm him down.'' She extends her paw outward for effect. “To keep it brief, and answer your questions, I'm not unshakable, I just know him very well. Mac really does not like ONI, don’t ask. And that, That was not murderous rampaging, You need to actually go to the battlefield to see that. That, was just directed anger.” She finishes taking her tail off his back and poking him on the snout with a paw before walking over to the door and heading through, returning to her lazy posture on the counter. “Now, are you two going to sign for this equipment or are you going to loiter in the supply bay all day?”
“What? Trying to get rid of us already, Vall? Thought you liked our company!” I gesture to me and Kevri while chuckling
“Liked, yes, but I also have other things to do like get some shipments ready fo-” a voice cuts her sentence short as we all turn to look at the door.
“I think this is the supply sergeant’s area. What do you think the agents meant by incid-” the person stops talking as they enter the Armory, Staring wide-eyed at what is going on in front of him.
A smaller voice trails in behind him, “What, why did you stop, it's just an arm...oh” another venlil. Another venlil was behind him.Un, Fucking, Believeable.
I must have been a sight, standing there clad in armor with Kevri hiding behind me, just shooting the shit with Vall. My eyes widened in surprise at their entrance. I don't think I could make this scene look any more awkward than it already was. What's more, this pair must have been the ones who were screaming, given their reference to the agents.
The Human is nothing much to look at as far as the military is concerned. He has a dark complexion, A buzz cut but obviously black hair, glasses? Why would a soldier need glasses in this day and age? Continuing on, he has a slender build, wait. THATS A FUCKING COLONIAL UNIFORM! Fuck, they’ll draft anyone apparently.
I eye the man up and down, making sure I see no wounds. I don’t see any so that's a good sign. I then shift my gaze to the new venlil, doing the same to him. He didn't like that much and seemed to shrink in on himself and quietly shuffled behind the man. I didn't want to think about what ONI might have done to them. I had to be sure.
“You two good?” I dryly ask.
“OH UH, YES SIR!” The Colonial shouts snapping himself to a salute” At least he can do that right. Sadly the Venlil beside him jumps and fumbles with himself at the sudden outburst, taking a moment to assess what just happened.
“Alright, alright, at ease uh-” I lean to get a better look at his upper arm to find a rank insignia, only there is none. Fuuuuuck.
“Sir, I only just transferred sir, My rank is PFC, Sir!” says seeming to notice the dilemma.
“Uhuh, and what rank is the venlil?”
“Private, sir!”
“I, uh, I just transferred as well” the tiny creature finally pipes up from behind the Pfc.
“The Corps will enlist just about anybody huh? And would you cut it with the sir shit? I think you put enough sirs in the last sentence to fill a medieval castle.”
“Yes, uuh, Sorry!”
Kevri would interject briefly “What's a medieval?”
I turned to Kevri “I'll tell you later.” He seemed dejected at that statement. I'm going to have to explain a lot of things to him when we get a moment to talk.
I turned my attention back to the PFC “Don't worry about it kid, I’m just glad you folks are okay.”
Out of the corner of my eye I see the Tanned Venlil quietly make his way around to the other two but I keep my focus on the PFC.
“Mind telling me what all the screaming was about?”
“UUhhh, Well si- Well… We kinda scared each other.”
What?
“You, scared each other?”
“Yes s- um, and then the lights blinded us.” the Pfc says while holding the straightest face.
“What lights?”
“They uh, The lights in briefing si- er, Sergeant.”
“So let me get this straight, and stop me if I'm wrong here.You were in a dark room, the lights came on and you screamed at one another?”
“Actually sir… We found each other in the dark, I uh, spoke a bit too loud, startled them,” he gestures to the venlil he walked in with, “They screamed, then I screamed, Then the lights came on because of that agent walking in… and the lights blinded us which in turn caused more screaming.” he finishes looking more and more embarrassed as he explains his story.
I just stare in absolute dumbfounded amusement at his story before chuckling out a retort "that sounds more like a bad first date than anything.”
I watch in further amusement as he snaps ridged. Glancing behind, I take note the tan venlil has also had a bit of a start.
"Anywho, give me a sec to finish up with the supply sergeant and we will be out of your hair. I'm sure you two are on a, ahem, very tight schedule." I flourish the last bit with as much sarcasm as I could muster.
“Sir…er, Sergeant, we literally just me-”
“Take the fuckin’ joke Private.”
I looked over at the group of venlil by the counter. Guess they would call that a herd… They appear to be asking Vall something.
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2023.05.24 20:30 Earthboom There's a difference between writing and story telling. They are not mutually exclusive.

EDIT OK Folks! It's been a wonderful ride, thanks for all of your time and earnest responses. This thread has gotten stale and I feel I'm getting the same canned responses to a throw away post I submitted while on the toilet. So, let me summarize here and clear up some commonly asked questions:
Q: Erfboom, you cad, are you saying people shouldn't read??
A. No. People should read. Yay books. I love books and you should too. They're great for many, many reasons. Reading them will indeed increase your writing ability and if you read enough, you'll get a good understanding for story structure. Given enough time, you may be able to implement proper story structure. If you don't read books, that's fine, your writing won't improve too much but that's okay, because you have a story worth telling anyway, right? Consider another medium to transmit your story, radio, podcasts, youtube, film, dance, whatever.
There are many roads to Rome with regards to storytelling. Writing, after years and years and years of submersing yourself in the craft both with practice and with reading, you'll eventually figure out what makes a good story, but there's a lot of easier roads and stories are literally everywhere. All anyone has to do is be observant.
Q: Erfboom, you villain, are you saying people can't learn how to tell a story??
A. No. Anyone can tell a story. Few of us can find meaningful stories to retell whether they're our experiences or observation of other people's experiences. Teaching someone how to find good stories is like teaching people how to find things worth filming, or painting, or photographing. Everyone has a camera, but who has a good eye for photos? That's the only thing I'm saying here.
Q. Are you saying anything that doesn't go through the publication process is trash??
A. No. I'm saying good writing doesn't immediately equal good stories. There are awesome stories in the fanfic world from both bad writers and excellent writers. There are awesome stories in the Amazon self publication world and there are 100 page long "stories" that sound like ChatGPT made them. Both can be written by a seasoned pro, or by an amateur and both will have varied success.
Q. But what if I like good writing??
A. Great. Enjoy that. Don't tell people good stories are gated behind good writing and if they don't know "ThE ClAsSiCs" they won't be good storytellers. Not true in an absolute sense. Really, this is the fuel behind my rant. Let people enjoy trash writing, let people write like trash. If they come for criticism on the writing, shred it to bits, but don't shred the story if they didn't ask you to. If you, as the writer, want criticism over story, this isn't the place for it.
Q. Any final thoughts?
A. Writing is cool. Books are cool. Stories are cool. Read all the books, or don't. Go to all the writing workshops or don't. Write your story, make sure your writing doesn't impede people consuming the story and then go from there. Great writing will only benefit you, but just because you can't write like the pros from jump doesn't mean you should abandon your dreams of writing at all. Your writing can always improve, your story will only get muddied with time as you forget detail after detail. Put the pen to paper, get to writing, finish the work and then see what needs to improve. If your writing is that awful, consider reading more books in your genre. See what they're doing, pay attention to their choice of words and the flow of the chapter. Attend workshops, classes, hop on here to do writing sprints, whatever the case may be. Just don't conflate writing for a metric of how good your story was and don't think consuming books is the only way you'll improve.
Everyone is a lit major that loves the oxford comma and writers are their own worst critics.
 
I wanted to post a thought that occurred to me as I lurked the various "rules", "pet peeves" and "If you don't read books you won't be a good writer" threads on here that are popular.
It seems to me the two concepts, writing and storytelling, are often times considered the same or interchangeable. This isn't the case.
Truly, there should be a story subreddit, a critical literature subreddit, and a writing craft subreddit as that's what I feel is where a lot of the friction is between members of the writing subreddit.
Writing, as I know it, is putting characters to paper through whatever means. You could write tech journals, you could write manuals, or receipt templates, or letters, poems, books whatever.
Story telling, as I know it, is an art form and it is communicating a message to the consumer via the retelling of events that happened to fictional or none fictional characters through the craft of writing.
You can be a bad writer and a good story teller. You can be a bad story teller but a fantastic writer. Please don't confuse the two.
When people on here post lengthy rants on what is good writing versus what is bad writing, they don't mention they mean prose, grammar, and the physical act of writing English down on paper.
There are people who love reading, not for the story, but for the way the author manipulates and transcribes English. They love writers, and writing, not stories or story tellers but certainly there are those that love both.
Similarly, there's people that love stories and don't care about million dollar words, award winning prose, or perfect grammar so far as the story is good.
If you don't like to read books, don't. You won't write well as a result because you don't have a catalogue of successful works to reference, but your story can still be good. There's many places on the internet that do well by writing poorly and telling good stories. There's also plenty of terrible writers who wrote good stories and got movie deals.
Understand what it means to be a poor writer and be okay with it. If you're out to tell a story then tell it, someone out there will read through your writing to get it. If you improve your craft then more people will get to the story and if you really improve your craft then even literary critiques will praise it.
It's all about your perceived audience. Who are you writing for? Writing critics? The common man? Others like you?
There's all kinds of sources on how to be a good writer on the internet but few on how to be a good story teller.
Be proficient at whatever you do, but please don't think writing is story telling because it's not.
I hope this provided a different viewpoint and helped someone. Please don't be intimated by the endless sour critics on here. They simply mean the craft of writing, but don't let that stop you from telling your story.
In addition, no matter how good of a writer you are, nothing in the world will help you be a good story teller. Like (maybe) Stephen King said, a small amount of writers just "get it" and they'll go on to be successful. The vast majority of you, despite all the English lessons and excellent prose, won't understand what makes a story good.
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2023.05.24 04:41 TheYagerist Eu perdi alguém que amava(amo) por um motivo idiota

Novembro de 2022, entre dia 13 e dia 20, conheci uma garota na empresa onde eu trabalhava, eu vi ela pela primeira vez dentro da operação quando fui pedir informações sobre o serviço e etc, desde então eu não tirei os olhos dela. Eu já trabalhava lá fazia um tempo e nunca tinha visto ela, eu comentei com um dos meus colegas sobre ela, sobre eu achar ela bonita mas eu nunca tive coragem de chegar nela, mas um dia no horário de janta eu vi ela e pedi um conselho pra esse meu amigo, e ele disse: cara, vai falar com ela, amanhã você pode não ter a oportunidade de novo. bom, eu me levantei rapidamente e fui, ela estava sentada sozinha (ela sempre estava sozinha), eu disse oi e perguntei se eu poderia me sentar, e ela disse sim, e foi assim que tudo começou, poucos dias dps de eu conhecer ela nós fomos em um show onde o Lucas inutilismo ia, ela que tinha me chamado, e foi incrível, ela era muito legal e a gente teve muito entrosamento desde o início, ela veio dormir em casa, jogamos video game até tarde, bebemos, ficamos, rimos, eu cantei pra ela e ela adorou, parecia até fanfic... de vdd, de manhã acordamos e eu levei ela no hospital por conta da ressaca kkk enfim, vivemos muitas coisas juntos, e eu comecei a gostar dela e parecia ser recíproco, então eu sustentei isso e continuei, mas dps de um tempo de conversa ela começou a se abrir mais referente ao passado dela, sobre a vida e os problemas, não vou dizer que eu não esperava nada disso, tava muito nitido q ela tinha problemas graves na vida e etc, mas eu realmente fiquei impressionado, a história dela é escandalosa, é triste, horrível, e isso fez eu gostar dela ainda mais, eu senti que ela merecia as coisas boas desse mundo, de que pelo menos uma vez ela pudesse conhecer alguém que fizesse o bem pra ela, enfim, vocês devem saber do que eu quero dizer, mas nem tudo é um morango e não demorou muito até os problemas da vida e do passado dela começasse a respingar e mim, então as vezes ela era muito bipolar, fria, fazia tempestade em copo de água, tinha muitos problemas emocionais mesmo... pra vocês saberem o nível da coisa, no natal eu levei ela em casa, pq de vdd,eu queria q ela ficasse feliz no natal pq porra, ela ia passar só com o irmão, os pais iam passar na igreja sei lá, e mermão, n ia ter nem uma ceia de natal e nem ia ganhar presente, e eu trouxe ela aqui e ela teve tudo isso, comeu uma ceia, ganhou presente, recebeu carinho... mas ela teve uma crise comigo pelo seguinte motivo: minha tia perguntou pra ela se ela estava esperando um pedido de namoro meu. ela disse: não sei. (ela deu uma resposta neutra) então eu também dei: tia isso eu tenho que resolver com ela primeiro.
e bixo, ela surtou tá, ficou estranha durante um mês inteiro a preço de nada, enfim, demorou pra mim entender que isso foi por conta dos problemas emocionais que ela tinha e etc, talvez ela se sentiu rejeitada e essas coisas, ela me xingou e falou q eu tinha nojo dela sendo q na mesma noite eu e ela ficamos, então eu n sabia oq pensar, mas enfim, dps disso aconteceram muitas coisas, vivemos muitas coisas boas juntos, nos conhecemos bem e éramos importantes nas vidas um do outro, mas dps de conhecer ela bem e da convivência eu descobri que um relacionamento com ela seria inviável, ela iria acabar com a minha saúde mental, então eu apenas aceitei a amizade e parei de meter marcha, e ela tbm aceitou isso e se contentou com a minha amizade, ela é importante pra mim de qualquer forma e eu só queria proteger e ver ela bem, então pra mim era lucro.
Depois desse desenvolvimento de texto e acontecimentos ksksk, estamos chegando nos finalmentes, passado alguns meses, estávamos nos dando bem, como de costume, éramos amigos e bons amigos, ela tinha contato com a minha família pois eu tinha trazido ela aqui já como eu havia dito, então ela foi convidada para o aniversário do meu primo que seria em um domingo, então estávamos combinando de ela vir aqui mais cedo no domingo antes do horário do niver pra eu e ela fazer o presente do meu primo (que seria um papercraft de south park), chegado o dia, eu dormi até 12:00 e mandei mensagem pra ela perguntando qual o horário que ela iria vim aqui, mas ela ficou puta comigo por eu ter acordado esse horário e me tratou mal. eu: que horas vc vai vir?? (com voz de sono, pois tinha acabado de acordar) ela: nossa, quando vc acordar me manda mensagem. (disse ela cheia de si) eu: relaxa fia, quando vc vim eu já vou estar de pé. (devolvendo na mesma energia) enfim, e não falamos mais nada, quando estava chegando próximo do horário de ir pro niver eu mandei mensagem pra ela (mesmo putinho) dizendo: quando vc chegar na estação me manda mensagem pra mim ir te buscar, to indo pra lá agora. ela me disse: acabei de chegar na minha casa. (sequidão total) eu: tranquilo, vou estar lá a partir das 15:40.
dps disso ela n falou mais nada e tbm não me mandou mensagem, eu fiquei triste por ela n ter ido mas fui orgulhoso pra perguntar no mesmo dia o pq de ela n ter ido, então esperei até quarta ou terça pra perguntar, e perguntei. as mensagens a seguir são as exatas mensagens que eu e ela trocamos, eu copiei e colei o chat.
eu: pq c n foi no aniversário do Yan?
ela: Vc se importa ?
eu : Sim Me admira vc ter dúvida
ela: Pra mim vc tava bem fodasi Primeiro que vc nem levantou cedo pra gente fazer os bonecos Tava respondendo de meia e meia hora Eu falei que eu tinha voltado pra casa e vc só "ata tô indo pra lá então se quiser aparece" Nem sabia onde era o Negócio Eu fui pra estação de franco e eu voltei pq quando eu tava no trem minha calça sujou E é isso Ai
eu: Eu falei isso pq uma mensagem antes eu tinha falado pra quando vc chegasse na estação vc mandar mensagem pra mim ir te buscar Aí vc disse mó secona: acabei de chegar na minha casa.
ela: Exatamente Eu tinha acabado de voltar com a calça suja Maneiro Aí vc só "ata já tô indo" Mas é isso aí cabo o assunto já foi
eu: Aí eu só devolvi a energia: Tranquilo, tô indo pra lá então Princereja, fala pra mim Como é q eu vou saber de uma coisa dessa?
ela: Perguntando ?
eu: Eu já tava puto com vc desde cedo, por isso q n perguntei Pq eu acordei 12, se vc viesse às 14 ainda dava pra fazer Aí tu: Mds, quando c acordar direito c me avisa Aí eu falei: rlx quando vc vim eu já vo tá acordado Aí c nem me avisa q tava com a calça suja aí, c n eu ia te buscar em **** E agra fica nisso aí ó Dxa os outro falando sozinho e os carai, dps é eu q n me importo
ela: 👍
eu: Beleza Vc magoa as vezes tbm tá N é sou eu não Tenta pensar nisso;
passado uns dias, eu enviei mensagens pra ela, perguntando se ela queria conversar, pedi desculpas, e nada, quase duas semanas dps de brigarmos ela me bloqueou no zap e me deseguiu no insta, fiquei arrasado, pq realmente n esperava esse extremo de uma situação dessas, mandei mensagem pelo insta, pedi desculpas novamente e perguntei se ela queria ir naquela café que eu e ela tinhamos ido e ela apenas visualizou, nós passamos muitas coisas juntos, ela confia em mim (ou confiava, eu n sei mais), e eu confio e amo ela... detalhe que ela vai se mudar mês que vem e eu definitivamente não quero ver ela partir brigado assim, tem muita coisa que eu não contei pra vocês mas n tem como eu contar tudo aqui, enfim, ela meio que me tirou da vida dela por conta dessa briguinha besta, eu era uma excelente pessoa pra ela, ela mesmo me disse, ela disse que tinha consideração por mim e que se ela fosse fazer alguma bobagem ela iria me avisar antes, e derrepente uma briga acontece e ela toma essa atitude, de vdd eu n sei oq fazer, n sei se eu tento mais, mas tbm n quero fazer ela se sentir desconfortável pensando q eu estou perseguindo ela ou coisa assim... enfim, essa é a história de como perdi alguém que eu amava(amo) por um motivo idiota. é recente e eu ainda sinto falta dela, eu sempre lembro ouvindo certas músicas, ela sempre estava presente no meu dia, me senti traído, dps de tudo oq vivemos, todos os momentos especiais sendo menosprezados e esquecidos por uma briga sem fundamento dessas. eu poderia falar muito mais, mas é isso, obrigado se vc leu até aqui e se tiver alguma pergunta ou algo a dizer, deixa aí embaixo. vlwww rapeize
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2023.05.23 19:29 superdude111223 Stop making your mc's always moral.

Ok, this is a bit of a rant, but I'm tired of seeing "morality arguments" here and elsewhere.
Taylor doesn't have the best morality in worm, and yet, people seem obsessed with either defending her morality or attacking her morality as if that somehow makes her a worse character.
For me, the most interesting character is not a paragon of moral good. Give me a pov from a serial killer, a politician, or other people of similar non-moral nature. Their perspectives are more interesting than a stupid "perfectly good" character.
For example, Taylor in the original worm story, especially in her warlord Era, does a bunch of morally questionable things. Why do some people think that means she becomes less compelling of a character because of that?
And why do people keep trying to defend the morality of a warlord supervillian? Like I get it, they are the protagonist, but stop trying to defend their morality. Sure Taylor thinks everything she does is perfectly good, but we know objectively that's not true. So stop pretending that Taylor never did a wrong thing. She is a much more interesting character when she cannot be called a "hero".
And I see this problem in fanfics too! STOP WHITEWASHING the morality of one side or another. I swear, I read one fic where the prt are irredeemable monsters, and in the next one, they are the best human beings.
People will make whoever they have designated as the "bad guys" in their fics absolutely horrible, and they will make the "good guys" perfect. Please stop doing this.
Yes the prt is corrupt, yes coil is very evil, yes armsmaster is a glory hound and a bit of a jerk. All of these things CAN be true at once.
The reason I see for all this, is authors trying to make their oc, si, or Taylor "right" when it comes to morality.
Authors keep writing main characters that are "moral", whatever the author believes to be moral anyway. The point I'm making here, is that you CAN write a main character who you as an author disagree with. The main character does not have to be "right" or "moral" just make them internally consistent and interesting.
I don't want a protagonist who is morally "right". I want an interesting character.
Does anyone agree or am I just alone here?
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2023.05.23 03:59 DagonG2021 A few questions for a SI fanfic I’m working on

Hello! I have a few questions I need help with for research.
Basically, the SI is reincarnated into Rhea and Daemon’s son, who of course never existed in canon. Rhea died giving birth to the SI, and this takes place in 112 AC- so she dies 3 years before in canon. Events go similarly for the most part until the Dance actually starts, for the sake of the plot, but I know there’ll be some divergences.
My main questions, I might have more:
What’s a plausible name Daemon would give his son?
Assuming he still marries Rhaenyra, would this son be considered heir to the Iron Throne over Jacaerys, due to being older?
Would it be better story-wise for the SI to claim Vermithor (Bronze dragon for a Royce, with bronze armor), or a hatchling of his own?
Is it reasonable for the SI to go with Luke to Storm’s End?
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2023.05.22 13:31 No_Salamander9084 Fanfic Help

Hey everyone, I’ve been working on a Jason Todd Si fanfic that develops on more on his resurrection from the pit, his time with all caste, and his relationship with the league of assasins going more in-depth in the mystical side of Gotham and DC and I’ve been indecisive on a love interest, Rose Wilson, Holly Granger (Hawk), or Artemis, I’d love to hear what y’all think
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2023.05.22 09:13 Frosty-One6335 OC/SI fanfics

I'm looking for any fics with OC or SIs It can be isekai, R.O.B (Random Omnipotent Being/Bull) or something They can have meta knowledge but do not have to They can but do not have to have powers or abilities from other fiction(games, boots, movies, animes etc) Does not have to be complete
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2023.05.21 12:07 KaiserMarcqui What Venlil names can tell us about their language

What Venlil names can tell us about their language
There’s been some talk recently(-ish) of making a Venlil conlang. I haven’t yet taken part in the discussion (because I’ve got no time lol), but this is something that does interest me quite a bit.
Now, I won’t be making a Venlil conlang. I’m not that masochistic... But I feel as if certain aspects of what we do know about their language that have been sidestepped in favor of discussing things like how their mouth and vocal tract would work and would interact with how they communicate. While that is indeed very interesting, I won’t be touching that because I know basically nothing about it. I’m instead, going to focus on the few pieces we have about the Venlil’s language: names.
I’m only going to use canon names, because I want to stay as close to what SP intended as possible. A great part of the name-collecting labor has been done by u/cruisingNW’s post, which I greatly appreciate. His posts about this topic are very interesting, though I won’t be following them.
I’m going to use a ton of lingustics terminology, and I sincerely apologize if nobody understands what I’m saying lol.

The names themselves

For completion’s sake, here are all the Venlil names that we know:
Main Story
Slanek, Tarva, Glim, Kam, Cheln, Haysi, Volek, Mulnek, Ilja, Thima, Carliva
Venlil Foster Program
Callsi, Jimek, Kaulin, Vana, Remsi, Tibek, Cylek, Nalva, Stram, Lashi
Human Exterminators
Rauln, Nam
Kalsim’s Trial and Sentence
Mynek
Predator Disease
Derva, Sialsi, Nulin, Mollsi

Phonology

I.e., what sounds a language can have.
I heavily recommend reading the Wikipedia article for the International Phonetic Alphabet. I’ll be using the IPA because it allows one to be more precise in describing and explaining sounds (and because the letter-sound correspondences are standardized, that way you won’t have to guess what I mean when I write a letter). The article also explains a lot of terminology, so it’ll definitely help you understand what I’m saying, haha.
We don’t know what sounds a Venlil can vocalize, but for my sanity’s sake, let’s just assume they’re the same a human mouth can make.
I’m also going to assume that what we have are reasonable romanizations of their actual names, that is, there are no weird English/Latin quirks like c = k = q and that each letter (or combination of) has a unique sound.
First, I’ll be trying to figure out what are the possible sounds (=phonemes) the Venlil language has (its phonemic inventory). Then I’ll be talking about how these sounds can be put together and interact with each other (its phonotactics).
As I’ve established, I’m assuming each letter has a distinct sound.
Most letters, I assume, will make the same sound as they do in English. Else it wouldn’t be romanized that way. There are, however, a few things that seem intriguing to me.
Firstly, it’s the distinction between c and k. In English, they make the same sound. But, considering that they have been transliterated as two different letters, it must mean that there are two different sounds. What these two sounds are exactly, we cannot know, since we have no recordings (this’ll be a recurring thing in this section), but we can guess. They must have a similar sound to their English equivalents, so I’m guessing a few possibilities. The first one is that they have the same sound as their IPA equivalents, so c = [c] (kinda like k but a bit forward in the mouth, in the palate, like in skew) and k = [k]. Another possibility is that, considering that c seems to be more common than k, it must represent a more “prototypical” sound, so something like c = [k], and then k = [c], or perhaps something further back, like the uvular [q]. I’m ruling out a Central/Eastern European-like [t͡s] for c because it would’ve probably been romanized as ts, and something like [t͡ʃ] is somewhat improbable as well because we’ve also got ch, which is probably [t͡ʃ] (as in English cheese). Then again, ch might be a Yiddish or Scots-like [x] (as in loch), which is plausible considering English speakers have some level of familiarity with these languages’ words (and so it’d be a reasonable way to transliterate that sound). However, most of the times [x] is romanized as kh, so I’m doubtful that ch = [x] in Venlil. Going back to c and k, considering that ch already occupies the palatal space, and that [c] and [t͡ʃ] are acoustically similar, I think the most plausible solution is c = [k] and k = [q].
There’s also the curious case of ll. It only appears before s, so it might just represent a “special version” of l before s (an allophone), but we also have very few names, so ll might appear in more places and we just haven’t seen it (and Sialsi disproves this, as l appears before s, which means that ll is not a “special pronounciaton” of l before s, but its own phoneme). I’m imagining it must represent a lateral sound like l, but which sound exactly is, again, unknown. Perhaps l is a “plain” or “clear” lateral [l], and ll is velarized or “dark”, as in Albanian [lˠ], or maybe it represents a palatalized l, like in Catalan or Spanish [lʲ]~[ʎ]. It could just as well simply represent a geminated (lengthened) version of l, [lː].
The Venlil language also doesn’t seem to have w. This is common, as most European languages, for example, only have v (if you listen to, say, German or Slavic people, you’ll notice they have problems distinguishing and pronouncing v and w). I imagine that the Venlil language goes the same way, since it only seems to have v (and it seems to be quite a common sound, as well). Considering that this v has nothing to contrast with, I’m guessing it has a more approximant pronunciation [ʋ] rather than a fricative one [v]. V also doesn’t seem to appear in the coda (the post-vocallic part of a syllable), and my guess is that, should it underlyingly appear in the coda, it would surface as a (semi)vowel [u]; which seems to be the case in the -au- dipthongs of some names like Kaulin and Rauln. A similar thing occurs in languages like Ukrainian.
Another sound that could be interpreted as vocalizing in the coda could be j, which most probably represents the same sound as ch but voiced, [d͡ʒ] (as in English jam); which would vocalize to y [i] in the coda, as in names like Haysi. However, this is a bit of a stretch in my opinion (though a similar thing occurs in certain dialects of Spanish). I’ll also later comment on the -ay- in Haysi, since it confuses me quite a bit.
This leaves us with no voiced fricatives. Now, in the future, SP might write a name with z in it and ruin my argument but, for the time being, the Venlil language doesn’t seem to have any phonemic voiced fricative. This can leave us with two options: it just distinguishes voicing in its stops (which is nothing weird; Spanish, for example, does this), or what is written as t d actually represents a different distinction, like aspiration: [tʰ t] (like in the Mandarin Chinese romanization, Pinyin). Alternatively, the Venlil language could have a three-way distinction with d t th, distinguishing both voicing and aspiration: [d t tʰ], like in many Indian languages (or like in Ancient Greek), which going back to our c/k conundrum, would resolve it really nicely, leaving us with a trio of j c ch [d͡ʒ t͡ʃ t͡ʃʰ], with k being just [k]. Though, to be honest, even if this “aspiration solution” does leave the consonant space much more neatly organized, I don’t think this is actually the case. My bet is that the Venlil language just plainly distinguishes voicing, and that’s it; with th and ch being pronounced just like in English, [θ t͡ʃ].
As for vowels, a e i o u must represent the plain “continental” values, just like in Spanish. There’s, however, a sixth vowel y, whose sound isn’t that quite clear. It could have the same value as its IPA equivalent, the front high rounded vowel [y] (doesn’t appear in English, but it sounds like French u or German ü). Though, considering that there are no other front rounded vowels (and they usually come together, either you have multiple or you have none), I don’t think this is the case. I think y represents a more central value, something like Polish or Welsh y [ɨ̞], or perhaps just a schwa [ə] (like in about). Considering that u has already stood for a vowel and a semivowel in the dipthong -au-, I’m wondering, then, if the -ay- in Haysi is actually a dipthong with this central y vowel (so, something like [aɨ̯]), and not a combination of a vowel plus the yod ([aj], like in ice). Curiously, that’d leave the Venlil language without the palatal approximant [j] (the yod, like in year), or at least without a phonemic yod. One could argue, however, that the combination -ia- in the name Sialsi isn’t bisyllabic, but an example of the vowel i becoming a semivowel near another vowel (something that happens in Welsh and the Romance languages), so the -ia- would actually be just one syllable, pronounced [ja] (like in German Ja).
The sound represented by h is also somewhat uncertain; it could just be a glottal fricative [h], just like in English, but there are also languages in which h represents a “stronger” sound, like the velar [x]. I’d wager, though, that it’s just a glottal [h]. Perhaps the pronunciation would vary from speaker to speaker, or depending on the sound’s position in the word/sentence?
Finally, something I’ve noticed is that it seems to only have one labial stop, b. This isn’t actually that weird – Arabic, for example, famously has b but no p. It does seem weird to me, however, that it distinguishes b and v, two sounds which are quite acoustically similar (though I might be biased as a native Spanish speaker, as Spanish speakers famously have a hard time distinguishing b and v). But, weirder things have been witnessed in real languages’ phonologies, so this isn’t really something to lose sleep over. The Venlil language also seems to lack f.
If I had to make the language’s phonology chart, it’d look something like this:
https://preview.redd.it/cffqnzr4s51b1.png?width=753&format=png&auto=webp&s=b271036548847466f80d738e5450df2059e5560f
This chart is, of course, optimized for space. / might not actually be an approximant [ɹ] (like the highly-characteristic English r), it might just as well be a tap [ɾ] (like Spanish single r, as in pero; or like in certain English dialects in butter) or a trill [r] (like Spanish double r, as in perro); the lateral consonants are also approximants; and one of h’s possible pronunciations, [h], is neither velar nor uvular, but glottal. In parenthesis I’ve put phonemes whose existance is dubious.
It also leaves some things to comment, as well. K /q/ does not have a voiced equivalent, but this is nothing weird. Most languages with /q/ don’t have its voiced equivalent, [ɢ], as phonemic (an example of this would be Arabic). Another thing, though, is that /θ/’s existance is really weird, since it just looks off in the table (it would be much neater without it), and it’s really strange that it hasn’t shifted to the labial [f], to which it is very acoustically similar and which is also much more distinctive and easier to pronounce (see also: th-fronting in certain London dialects). This makes me think that maybe I was right with my earlier theory of a three-way stop distinction, which would leave the table like this:
https://preview.redd.it/b33qsa8mo71b1.png?width=639&format=png&auto=webp&s=b856766c55a6b40c0f15ff2f473076283b87794c
I’m putting kh in parentheses because it hasn’t appeared (yet?), and so its existance is unconfirmed. I should also mention that it’s common for a language to not have a distinction in all of its places of articulation; Navajo, for example, distinguishes aspiration for all of its stops, except for the labials, in which it only has an unaspirated b /p/. If so, the Venlil language having /k/, /g/ but not /kʰ/ wouldn’t really surprise me; same thing with only having a voiced /b/ but not /p/ or /pʰ/.
While this interpretation would make more sense than the original, I don’t like it because pronouncing Callsi as “Challsi” just doesn’t jibe with me. I’ll let you judge for yourself, however.
And, for completion’s sake, here’s the vowel system:
https://preview.redd.it/79k15pzbs51b1.png?width=401&format=png&auto=webp&s=d22ca042d70fa65bb7af3cf151ae93b7b34ada8d
The actual realisations may vary, i.e. e might range from mid-high [e] to mid-low [ɛ], as vowels tend to do. But this is a pretty simple 6-vowel system, definitely nothing much compared to English’s 14-20-vowel system (the actual number of vowels depends on the dialect).
Dipthongs, or simply vowel combinations, don’t seem to be individual and indivisible units, unlike in English or other Germanic languages. Rather, the Venlil language seems to follow a more Romance-like approach, where dipthongs are simply two vowels in the same syllable. Thus the -au- in Rauln is not its own phoneme, but the phonemes /a/ and (unlike in English mouse, where /au/ is its own unit and not simply /a/+). Combining this with the -ia- in Sialsi, I imagine, then, that any high vowel can combine with a non-high vowel in the same syllable.

Phonotactics

I.e., how the sounds a language has can be put together.
In the syllable onset (that is, the part of the syllable that comes before its nucleus, the vowel), it seems like there can only be at most three consonants, like in the name Stram. The other complex syllable onsets we’ve seen are in Slanek and Glim. I’m tempted to say that the str- in Stram is actually underlyingly /s, with an epenthetic t (a consonant added for ease of pronounciation; in English this occurs sometimes with people saying “hampster” instead of “hamster”). Therefore, it seems like it actually only allows clusters of two consonants. The second consonant cannot be any kind of consonant, it seems to be restricted just to liquids (r and l, perhaps ll as well).
The syllable nucleus seems to only allow vowels. This is nothing weird, most languages only allow vowels in their syllable nuclei. Names like Cheln or Rauln might dispute this, however, as they might be interpreted as bisyllabic, with a syllabic n: Che-ln, Rau-ln (compare button, also with a syllabic n, [ˈbʌtn̩]). I don’t think this is the case, however, and that -ln is one of the few permitted coda consonant clusters.
Speaking of the syllable coda, it also doesn’t seem to allow that many consonant clusters. The only one we’ve seen is -ln. I’m tempted to say that -ln is the only allowed coda consonant cluster and leave it at that.
However, complex onsets and codas only seem to be permitted in the start and end of words, respectively. All word-internal consonant clusters we’ve seen seem to be split between syllables, and they’ve been clusters of only two consonants. Moreover, what kind of consonants are allowed to cluser seems to be restricted, like with the onset clusters I’ve mentioned earlier. The clusters we’ve seen are -rv-, -ln-, -lj-, -rl-, -lls-, -ms-, -lv- and -ls-. Again, it seems that the Venlil language likes having clusters only with continuants (“soft” sounds, liquids being a subclass of them, but also including things like nasals); in this case, it seems that the first consonant must be a continuant – m, n, v, r, l, ll, with v vocalizing to u as already mentioned before – with the second one being any consonant.
All in all, the Venlil language has a much less complex and more orderly syllabic structure than English. I doubt that stuff like [ŋkθs] as in strengths or [ksθs] as in sixths is allowed.

Morphology (and morphophonology)

I.e., how new words are derived made from other words, how prefixes and suffixes work, and how they interact with the sound system.
What we see in names is that we’ve got a few common suffixes, mainly -va, which seems to be a femenine suffix, and -ek, which seems to be a masculine one, but I haven’t checked if -va names are exclusively females’ and -ek are exclusively males’. There’s also a -si suffix, also apparently femenine.
The -va suffix actually shows us a bit of morphophonology, i.e., how these suffixes interact with the language’s phonology. There seems to be an -a suffix in names like Thima and Vana, but I think this is the same one as -va, with the v being deleted due to euphony: it seems like the language doesn’t like -mv- and -nv-, and so it just deletes the v. So Thima is underlyingly thim + -va.
The -ek suffix also seems to be actually -nek, with names like Mynek being myn + -nek, with -nn- being reduced to just -n-, so the language must not allow geminates. Same thing with Jimek: -mn- is just reduced to -n-, so we can deduce that it also doesn’t like two nasals being together. However, the names Volek and Cylek put this in question, because -ln- is already established as a legal cluster.
What the -va, -nek and -si suffixes mean is, however, unknowable, but we can guess. Perhaps they’re just obligatory suffixes every word must have, like with Latin -us, -a, -um, -is, etc. Considering they’re personal names, maybe one of these suffixes is an agentive suffix (denoting the doer of an action), or perhaps it’s the inverse and is a patientive suffix (denoting the reciever of an action). Hypothetically, then, tar would mean “to love”, with tarva meaning either “lover” or “beloved”, and the given name Tarva comes from that. This is just one possible option, however.

Conclusion

I’m not going to make a Venlil conlang, as that’d be too much work for me. However, I hope that with this post, I’ve established a base for whomever decides to do so. Just with a few bits and pieces of language – in this case, given names – one can deduce many things. If we had just one sentence (and its translation), one could deduce many more things. Hell, even if you aren’t making a Venlil conlang, if you’re just a fanfic writer, this post would be useful to you as well, since I’ve established what kinds of sounds are allowed, allowing one to create plausible Venlil names.
However, I should also mention that many of the things I’ve mentioned are speculative. Nothing is 100% confirmed. I also doubt that SP was thinking this deeply when making Venlil names, as most authors aren’t making entire languages just to name a few things in their stories. But, hey, extrapolation is fun...
And, my sincerest apologies if you’ve understood nothing, as I’ve perhaps used too much linguistics terminology for the average layman to understand. Thank you for reading my rambling about Venlil names, haha.
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